Arcturus (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} books_out_loud) wrote, |
Thanks!
the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines are supposed to connect the whole thing. As if all of those thoughts occurred between casting the gaze, and having it land.
I guess I need a way to make that more apparent.
the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines are supposed to connect the whole thing. As if all of those thoughts occurred between casting the gaze, and having it land.
I guess I need a way to make that more apparent.
